I'm not sure this wasn't fanfiction originally, it has many bad fanfic problems
- gay for you
- all women are bitches
- small bottom, tall top
- men acting like sappy romance females
- lots of melodrama of the awkward kind
- constant TSTL moments
and unfortunately except for the competent prose there was nothing to lift it out of that vale of meh. So this is an okay read, not really engendering the need to read more of the same kind.